miércoles, agosto 18, 2004

 
I did it

After three years of english I've pased the level six final exam (actually I've pased six final exams, one for each level). This is like... I don't know... odd. Any way, here is the writing (the underlined text shows the teacher's corrections).


Writing

2.-

I remember a memorable evening. It was a concert in Plottier's cultural room (I know that it's not an exciting name for a concert's room, but it's a beautifil, small place). I can remember the feeling, it was so exciting with a
lot of familiar people.

I remember the start of the show, with all the people talking and laughing and walking around... both: public and singers! Suddenly, the singers started to sing anything and in a messy way, then the lights were turned off and a speaker started to tell a story. When the speaker finished his speach the choir, that had been taking fixed positions, started to sing... then things went well. But I remembertheir faces as if all of us knew that it was our last concert together.


Black.


N. by R.: Any other writing mistake in this post is just my foult.



posted by nEgRo 6:05 p. m.